And here is my completed story wot I have now finished
Crocodile Dreaming
The teacher took Joseph Miller to the zoo. In fact she took
the whole class, including Joe, who was the second smallest student. It would
have been better to be the smallest, but that position was filled by Martha
Eggleton, who was not only short, but also blond and dimpled. Everyone felt
protective towards Martha. Joe had red hair, and more freckles than ‘you could
shake a stick at’ as Granny Miller liked to say. Joe didn’t get
how a shaking stick was a way to measure anything but Granny used it quite a
lot. He also had teeth that refused to sit neatly in a straight row, and
wore glasses because otherwise the words on the board looked like wet weetbix. His
classmates found all these things impossible to ignore. Maybe if Joe played
sports, things would be different. But he didn’t, and they weren’t. He wasn’t
really the right shape for sports.
Joe liked the idea of going to the zoo. Animals seemed much
less complicated than people. His Mum and Dad took him once but they were busy
people and hadn’t managed to fit in another visit yet. He tried to hide his
excitement in the week leading up to the visit. The other boys in his class
found other people’s excitement annoying. At least that’s how they found Joe’s
excitement.
It was cloudy the day of the trip. Ms Terry said this was
perfect zoo visiting weather. Sunshine made animals sleepy and want to hide
away in their dens in the shade. Joe stayed on the bus till all the other
students were off as he often tripped over other peoples legs. But when he
finally emerged he sniffed the earthy combination of animal fragrances and
smiled.
“Hurry up Joseph,” Ms Terry called. “Stop dawdling.”
The animals didn’t disappoint.
“Miss, aren’t flamingos meant to be pink?” Harry Tanner
asked as he hung over the railing at their enclosure.
“They’re grey because of the food they eat,” Joe said. “When
they’ve eaten enough shrimps and stuff they’ll change colour and be pink.”
“Quite so, Joseph,” Ms Terry said tartly.
“Yes Joseph, quite so,” Harry parroted.
It was a small mistake, laughing at Harry when the llama spit
at him. Everyone laughed at Joe when Harry spat at him at school, and frankly
Joe didn’t see the difference. But apparently there was one because Harry let
him have it while no one was looking during morning tea break beside the band
rotunda. Harry’s friends egged him on.
Joe tried not to cry, but his nose hurt.
“What’s all this?” asked Ms Terry when she finally noticed.
“They’re crocodile tears Miss. They’re not real. I didn’t do
anything,” Harry said in his own defence, out of habit, even though Joe had
said nothing.
Joe didn’t bother mentioning that crocodiles did actually
cry real tears. And that it had nothing to do with pretending they felt sad
when they didn’t.
The crack in the left hand lens of his glasses made the
animals look mysterious; especially the crocodile, already a little sinister,
eyeing Joe from under half closed lids, through the vapour of the climate-controlled
Reptile House. Half submerged in murky water, the animal floated perfectly still.
Its knobbly, patterned hide made Joe think of dragons, and the knights who fought them. Magnificent teeth, curving and
pointed and long, sat outside the crocodile’s lips in a predatory grin. Who
could really tell what simmered below the calm and silent surface? Only a low
railing separated the pond and its grassy surrounds from the visitors.
“This is boring,” Harry declared. “Crocodiles never do
anything. And they’re ugly.” He
smiled at Martha who flashed a dimple back. “Let’s go see the lions.” Everyone
was slowly filing out, students pushing and shoving in their impatience. It
might have been an accident. Who could tell in the end? But Harry’s elbow
caught Joe in the back as he leaned over the fence. Joe found himself falling
forward, watched closely by those crocodile eyes. He landed on the edge of the pond, his hands
in the water. What was that beneath his hand? He grasped at it.
Laughter erupted behind him. Joe wasn’t quite sure how being
in danger was funny.
As quickly as he’d fallen in, the crocodile keeper yanked
him out, pulling him up by the back of his shirt. The crocodile had not moved.
Even though that’s what they usually did when food fell down right in front of
them. How odd.
“You should never climb into an enclosure,” the keeper
warned. “Crocodiles are killers.”
There seemed little point in Joe saying he’d been pushed.
“Yes,” he said instead. And, “Thank you.” But already the
keeper was moving off to attend to his next task. The room had emptied. Joe
opened his palm out and looked down at the crocodile tooth, large and hard and
yellowed. He popped it in his pocket and glanced at the crocodile.
“Thanks for not eating me,” he said.
The crocodile blinked, a slow single tear sliding down its
cheek. Joe said, “Bye,” and hurried off to find Ms Terry and the others.
His parents told Joe to be more careful when he showed them
his broken glasses after school that day. They fished his spare pair out of the
hall cupboard and handed them to him. It felt so much better not to have a
fault line running through his eyesight. Joe didn’t tell them about the tooth.
Instead he put it under his pillow as he got into bed that night.
He dreamed…
His nose filled with the scent of animals rising up from the
ground beneath him. Zebras, antelope, giraffes, and lions. And darker things. Hyenas,
man. He moved forward slowly across the
grass, with a scything motion, twitching from side to side, his tail sweeping
the ground behind him. His claws dug into the earth. He blinked, a lazy
movement, felt his teeth slide over his lips as his mouth clamped shut.
Joe felt powerful, hungry, and confident. He reached the
edge and slid into the water, surging forward as the fluid took his weight. His
view blurred a little as his third eyelids moved across his eyes, but they kept
the water out. He watched bubbles rise up from his nostrils to break the
surface of the water above. Submerged reeds swayed, silt from the riverbed
swirling with his movement and the currents. Thin sharp shapes darted: fish too
small for his appetite. This was his domain. Here the rules were simple. Here
he felt at home.
“Good sleep?” Joe’s mum asked as she poured cereal into his
bowl the next morning.
“Mmmm,” Joe replied. Telling his mum ‘maybe’ or ‘no’ would
only lead to a difficult chat between them. He felt the tip of the crocodile
tooth in his shorts pocket. Joe smiled at his mum and pushed his glasses up.
He felt different when he walked through the school gate. He
was still a boy, but he felt his tail sweeping the ground behind him, his
eyelids closed and opened in a slow, lazy blink, and his teeth … his teeth felt
sharp.
Harry was waiting for Joe, as he often did. Half way along
the corridor leading to their classroom. Just in front of the hook where Joe
would have to stop and hang his schoolbag.
“Have a nice swim in the crocodile pond yesterday?” Harry
asked, looking smug.
“Yes I did thanks. I felt right at home,” Joe replied. His
tail twitched, his jaws closed and Joe rolled with his prey.
SNAP!
“They’re just crocodile tears,” Joe said to the gathering crowd
as he hung his bag up and headed to his classroom.
He felt sure, as he took his seat at his desk, that at the
zoo the crocodile was grinning.
1 comment:
I love this Melinda - initially got pulled in (excuse the pun) by your statement 'wot I have now finished' :)
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